4th Draft for Print Production 1 - Changes needed to be made

I finally completed the draft for our first print production, and all of us attended the session today in order for us to give it to our teacher so we could get some feedback, and for him to check if there was anything we could change or add. As you can see, I stuck with the layout of which we used for our 3rd draft of our first print production although I made some changes to it .i.e. the re-positioning of the text. We gave our 4th draft for our first print production to our teacher, in order for him to check it, he sat down with us and read through our print production. Overall he said it was good, although there were one or two minor mistakes, and that we needed to sort them out. We aim to make these changes and post up our new first print production on our blog later today. ツ