The feedback we received from our pitch was both positive as well as negative, although this did vary from a range constuctive feedback. After considering and discussing the feedback we have received our main objection in our film was the charaters and setting that we needed to change. Although it did take a lot of time and effort in creating our storyline, we did need to change the characters and make it as realistic as possible. After hearing this our group decided to alter the whole storyline as it did not match with the new characters we have created, thus resulting in a new narrative and setting and of course a new film title. After taking this into consideration and discussing this with my group we have come up with things that we will change and need to improve, so below I have listed 5 EBI and 5 NSB.
Even Better If
- Change the narrative
- Change the setting
- Change the characters
- Our film needs to appeal to both genders
- We need to remember to focus on the certification of the film
- We need to come up with a new storyline
- Think about a range of characters to use, that will appeal to both our genders
- The setting has to relate with the narrative as well as being realistic
- Think of a range of shots we should use to portray different aspects characters
- Sum up an overview of everything we have considered and take to action by starting our production
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